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__The pie charts below show the percentage of students who lived in dormitories at a particular university in Australia in 2002 and 2012.__
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**__Here some sample responses for the IELTS writing task 1 question above:__**
🔸 In 2008, Australia had the highest amount of students with a part-time job, with 14 thousands.
🔸 The quantity of Australian students with a part-time job declined steadily, from 14,000 in 2008 to 11,000 in 2016.
🔸 However, in 2016, Australia decreased and had a figure of 11,000.
🔸 New Zealand had a larger amount of high school students with part-time employment in 2016 with a difference of 2,000. While, Fiji’s
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2025-01-25 11:10
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🎓 **What IELTS score do you need for your Dream Destination?**
**Australia** 🇦🇺
🔹 **__For undergraduate or diploma__** - Overall band score of **6** or **6.5**
🔸 **__For postgraduate__**- Overall band score of **6.5**, and even each section should have at least **6** bands
**Canada** 🇨🇦
🔹 **__All degrees__** - Total score of **6.5** and minimum of **6** per section
**UK** 🇬🇧
🔹 **__Undergraduate degree__** - a minimum score of **6.5**. However, you must have band score of **7.0** or hig
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2025-01-27 06:09
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☑️ **Corrections with explanations**
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The issue here is with the number. Even though the table says the data is measured in thousands, when we use a specific number, this word is not pluralised. Therefore, the sentence should say:
In 2008, Australia had the highest amount of students with a part-time job, with 14 **thousand**.
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The problem with sentence is that the writer has mentioned ‘declined steadily’, when in fact this is not a continuous time period (it is only two dates with a ga
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🎵#SongsForLearningEnglish
**Want to learn English through song?**
An IELTS playlist with recommendations to improve your band score!
**BAND 5**
🎵[Beautiful things](https://youtu.be/Oa_RSwwpPaA?si=81dpM7q3cXLda16-) - Benson Boone
🎵[Easy on me](https://youtu.be/U3ASj1L6_sY?si=uDuvYuZ61PzPEZMS) - Adele
🎵[Perfect](https://youtu.be/2Vv-BfVoq4g?si=VVxVL5uzuAR8I5xy) - Ed Sheeran
**BAND 7**
🎵[All of me](https://youtu.be/450p7goxZqg?si=c8xWGoji6Umn3DaU) - John Legend
🎵[Dreams](https://youtu.be/Y3ywicf
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